Sunday, February 05, 2012

United. Apart.


Early summer night; 
In distant lands.
Away,
 Apart. 
Yet, united 
by a moon over head.
And the after taste
of our first kiss.

7 comments:

Neha Shandilya said...

This is so simple yet so effective.. :)

Divenita said...

:) Nice one.
Liked the last 3-4 lines

pygmalion said...

So much conveyed in so less words
This, I would say is the real talent
Cheers

Saru Singhal said...

Beautiful...:)

hari said...

This explains the KISS(Keep it Short and Simple) :)

Muse said...

:)

Aayushi Mehta said...

Very good writing.