Monday, December 19, 2011

icebreaker


With just an inch 
in between
He counted 
those minute lines
on her lips;
Like a Prisoner
Counting the bars;
Imprisoned 
in anticipation.
And as those lips locked, 
He tasted freedom
in breathlessness.

8 comments:

:-Dee said...

BRILLIANT!!! Just so crackling crisp and to the point, and absolutely splendid. Wow!!! :) I LOVED it!!! :)

Saru Singhal said...

Intellectual writing:)

Lavanya Snigdha said...

I could hear a drumroll as I read this.... :D

Divenita said...

Tasted Freedom in breathlessness --Master stroke

pygmalion said...

taste of freedom.. in breathlessness
brilliant!!!

Dolly Singh said...

Wow! You are writing a lotta romantic writes, of late!
And I loved this one too!

Archana Chari said...

freedom in breathlessness - profound!

Aayushi Mehta said...

Wonderfully, wonderfully put.