Saturday, August 06, 2011

Read between the lines

Her toes curled, in response;
Like a touch-me-not plant
Under the drizzle's influence.
As she felt his palm
Cradle her heel.
And his pointer finger
Read the lines
On her tender sole.

18 comments:

travelmuse said...

Loved it!

Jyoti Mishra said...

well expressed n crafted.
Nice read !!

Divenita said...

Such short writes work good for you and also are effective

shooting star said...

full of implications....leaves one to imagine much!!!

Smriti said...

Nice :)

Priyanka Khot said...

A very intimate moment described keeping the emotions intact even in words. You play of words is a master's work!

Waiting to read a lot more from your pen.

Thousif Raza said...

i like the moment which u created with that, says so many things and i like it lot. its beautiful in everyway... :)

Thx for visiting my space... hope to see more of you there :)

Take care and keep writing.........

Charu said...

Hello! Decided to drop by and check out your blog as well. You really have a beautiful one here :)
Well written and makes us think about other rainy day memories...

Saru Singhal said...

Awesome Awesome Awesome...Read between the lines:)

Cloudia said...

Very Nice!


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Babli said...

Very beautifully expressed. Liked it very much.

Risha Kalra said...

Short, Crisp and expressive!
I read between the lines too ;)

David C Brown said...

Vivid.

Trotter said...

Hi Amit! So, We, The People who are not in holidays, keep the blogosphere alive... ;)

Interesting blog you have here!!

Thanks for your comment at Blogtrotter Two, which just crossed Corsica from North to South. Enjoy and have a wonderful weekend!!

:-Dee said...

Those are some lovely lines! I enjoyed reading your posts! :)

ZeroCool said...

beautifully expressed :) loved the feel :)

magiceye said...

this is beautiful!

sprinklesofchatter said...

This was an incredible delight to read... :)