Friday, July 08, 2011

Better 1/2

He sipped from the saucer
While she drank from the cup;
Life, like coffee tasted better
When enjoyed, one by two;

11 comments:

Divenita said...

:) after a long time, you wrote something that touched the heart!

Muse said...

Their cup runneth over!

Ash said...

So true. Thanks for visiting my blog. Do drop by again!

Benaifer said...

In just four simple lines, could there be a better way to express the beauty of love and togetherness?... naah, i don't think so!... love this one :)

Smriti said...

Loved it! :)

shruthi said...

Touched! :')

travelmuse said...

Though small poem it is interesting and touching!
Thanks for visiting my blog.

Pradeepa said...

Wow, I love this one. You write beautiful poems. Thanks for stopping by my blog.

Arpit Rastogi said...

Awesome post!
You ve a nice blog..
Keep it up! :)

Arpitha Holla said...

simple and beautiful.. :)

New Nonentities said...

I liked this one a lot...good one...do keep writing...pls keep in touch