Monday, August 17, 2009

Onus

One step closer,
Let your gaze
Rest in mine.
Take a good look.
Do you see a splinter?
A tiny speck,
A barrier, an impediment,
That’s flanked by our vision.
My sight’s quite hazy,
Clouded and grief-stricken.
Every move stings
Yet I’m trying
To see through the pain.
Correct me,
If I’m wrong.
Is that a piece of log
in your eye?

4 comments:

CoFfEe AnGeL said...

hmm...v.deep. warcked with pain...
but beautiful in its questioning misery...

Sanket Rathod said...

Difficulty "seeing" the other side?

Muse said...

"The Faults I see in others' lives
Are often true of me.
So help me, Lord, to recognise
My own hypocrisy"

How often does a tiny splinter blind a vision!

Good One, Sir Charles!

smriti said...

beautiful one, eddy