Monday, May 19, 2008

Revelation

Show me your eyes
For I have a message to recite in my frail voice.
Forget the story of your past
That brought you here, this far, tonight.

Wipe those tears clean
Don’t let them come in between.
They’ll only blur your vision,
And make you lose your aim.

Look at you; you look estranged and lost,
Lost in yourself and entangled in fate’s knots,
In your own world
You look like a stranger from afar.

Hold your head high, let the clouds touch,
Don’t let it droop or succumb to this earth’s laws.
Lift your head up and plant it on your shoulders.
Let the storm face its demise, stand firm as a rock.

You're not an untaught,
That you can't read the volumes hidden in people’s eyes.
It's just that you need to practice to excel and master the art.
To read the hidden epics between those wretched lines;

Show me your eyes
For I have a message to recite in my frail voice.
The future that’s yet to be written in the pages of our life;
Btw, I’m your inner voice. Now, let me not spoil the surprise.

18 comments:

kamna said...

Wipe those tears clean
Don’t let them come in between.
They’ll only blur your vision,
And make you lose your aim..


WhooooSh!!!!!!!!!
loved it..

Quanta said...

This write comes across as f it has been penne just for my eyes!!

At this point in my life it holds true for me.

Glad to have red this.

Thank you.

Priya said...

beautiful words...its didactic and makes one think...

Ivory Maiden said...

It's a pleasure to read such wonderful piece of writing on a morning wonderful!

Pri said...

our inner voice keeps tiring itsself to reach us...
but often times it goes ignored! :)

Amber Light said...

Yeah it shouldn't be a frail voice. We all need to listen to it more often.
"That brought you here this far tonight" Too true. The journey of discovering our inner self is a long one.
Deep, thought provoking and beautiful. Thank you!

shiney said...

It's really imp to talk to urself........and u surely do that!

incredible write!

Nandhini said...

How can u create such excellent SCRIBBLES on a delicate theme as dis? [:o]
Awesome [;)]

lavanya snigdha said...

i like this read, it makes me smile and think of all those times when im lost in myself and i am looking for hope...
:)
good work.

The Muse said...

Like the idea.

Good one:)

Winnie the poohi said...

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Hold your head high, let the clouds touch,
Don’t let it droop or succumb to this earth’s laws.
Lift your head up and plant it on your shoulders.
Let the storm face its demise, stand firm as a rock.


Show me your eyes
For I have a message to recite in a frail voice.
The future that’s yet to be written in the pages of our life;
Btw, I’m your inner voice. Now, let me not spoil the surprise.

*sigh*

beauty with amazing sensitivity..

So will a closeup pic of eyes do? [;)]

samay said...

good one...thought provoking...reflects ur spiritual self :)

Priyanka Khot said...

Awesome post as usual and i like the fact that u are back to writing about hope...

BTW... the observant me could not help but notice that again!!! ONLY GIRLS COMMENT ON YOUR BLOG :P

Matangi Mawley said...

tht was beautiful!

sunita said...

You're not an untaught,
That you can't read the volumes hidden in people’s eyes.
It's just that you need to practice to excel and master the art.
To read the hidden epics between those wretched lines;

as usual u r at ur best..........

Pretty Me!! said...

this one fr me !!!!! spcly d lines :

Hold your head high, let the clouds touch,
Don’t let it droop or succumb to this earth’s laws.
Lift your head up and plant it on your shoulders.
Let the storm face its demise, stand firm as a rock.


i really needed to heed to this message :)

my inner world said...

WOW !!!

this is honestly one of the best i have come across, and the best thng is it has been written on my favourite sunject - eyes :)

a very sensitive subject dealt so finely.

"THE BARD WHO DOESNT HAVE TO TRY TOO HARD" said...

loved the message u've conveyed..especially this stanza stands apart..
"Hold your head high, let the clouds touch,
Don’t let it droop or succumb to this earth’s laws.
Lift your head up and plant it on your shoulders.
Let the storm face its demise, stand firm as a rock."