Thursday, April 17, 2008

Dream

Canons rust in peace

Earth’s turned completely green

Hope it’s not a dream

10 comments:

Pri said...

wonderful!!
yes i agree this situation is almost become a dream now :(

Dipa Uchil said...

Wonderful thought...one suggestion
Can u add few more haiku lines...
wanna knw wat happened next...
Plz Scribble sm more ;)

smriti said...

dreams do come true....keep the faith :)

just awesome...

haiku fever spreads finally :P

vEENs said...

wow...!

Winnie the poohi said...

loved it to extreme!!!

The Muse said...

There's already one titled 'dream',in your scribble pad..
still,this one is a different dream!
so,never mind!

As i always say,"hope never disappoints"..
Let's hope against hope!

"THE BARD WHO DOESNT HAVE TO TRY TOO HARD" said...

laconical..n loely :)

Dheepikaa B said...

Lovely. :)

miles to go before i sleep... said...

love it..

jagadeesh said...

Beauty! But is it not 5-6-5? Or did I count wrong again!? :)