Thursday, April 17, 2008

Crying in the rain

In the pouring rain
She tries hard fighting her tears
But only in vain

7 comments:

Pri said...

noce one :)

kinda reminds me of the famous line by chrlie chaplin---"i like to walk in the rain because nobody knows im crying"...

Dipa Uchil said...

Scribbler at his haiku best ;)
Very touching lines..
Keep scribbling alwayz... :)

smriti said...

nice one....both charlie's :P

vEENs said...

wow! loved it totally.

Winnie the poohi said...

ohh haikus in the air :)

rukhiya said...

Ah! this one gave me quite a few lines too-put it up on mine,with the additional ramblings :)

Madhuri said...

wow !!!