Saturday, November 10, 2007

May I?

May I sing to you tonight?
So that I may put you to sleep for a while.
I might go off tune or even skip a beat,
So just pretend as though you're listening,
And rest with those eyes closed real tight.

May I tell you a story tonight?
Of things that might just cross our minds.
Not from any fable or any old fairy tale.
But of a brand new world only we'd get to see.
The stories of future where we play the lead.

May I see your pristine smile?
I know it's hard yet you can try.
Forget the pain and grief that's tormenting you tonight.
Cos it'll only spark a flame
That'll spread like a forest fire.

May I just go down on my knees to express?
To say how much I love my princess.
Cos I just don't want, this moment, to let go,
As it might make you feel a lot better than before.
For I'm here to offer all that tender loving care,
You've always been yearning for.

24 comments:

Pri said...

very romantic...something to die for...
she is indeed very lucky :)...

lovely scribble!

Manisha said...

Wow .... Just Awesome !!!!
u have very nicely narrated ...wht a girl would wish for ......
wish someday somebody would say it to me .....

Nisha said...

hey Amit.. this is fantastic.. :)

"Cos I just don't want, this moment, to let go,
As it might make you feel a lot better than before."
.... just love these lines

Keep it up.. :)

P.S: WHERE HAVE YOU BEEN????

smriti said...

awww...thts choo chweeeet n cutu...loved it :)

Shal said...

Beauty !!

its such peacfull love :):)

Candid Confessions said...

Aww! That is such a cute thing.. How heartfelt and thoughtful!

sashu said...

lovely write! a subtle n tender love...so very heartfelt :)

Di said...

ah! the romantic...
beautifully woven
to woo any woman :)

ps. could you scrap me on orkut once a nw wrk goes up on d blog?
cheers!

Madhavi said...

May I say,this is just wonderful...beautiful expressns n feelngs put into right words n expressed so truly n itz so lovely..luckiest would b
the lady who shall b the love of such a poet :)
aahhhhhhhhh just so good :)

Tiya said...

heya scribbler.. just stumbled across ur blogspot... n i shud say u got some talent... keep scribblin like this.. ;) we r lovin it.. all de best...

Waqas said...

fantastic...very beautiful

Binny said...

Lovely....loved the flow of words :)

Megna.m said...

looks like there are many ladies who want to be swept off their feet from the way you expressed those feelings in your scribble. hehe.

Great stuff.

shweta said...

again... Wow!! Who is this lucky lady? :)

Vikram Singh Tomar said...

Perspective ....

Someone will think it to be about his daughter ...
Someone ..his girlfriend ...
Someone his wife ....
And Someone his sister ...


The deepness in the love and the deepness in the expression match drastically giving a whole new way to the expression of LTC (love tenderness and care )

Its Moving ...

▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬
My dear ones say they understand my emotions
But then why is it that no one answers my questions?

--- Why is it
by ★♥Mσσи wαlkєя♥★
▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬▬

rachana said...

wow!!romantic you!!! loved it

kamna said...

oh ma god..
ur this aspect is vulnerable..

SOUL'S SCRIBES!!! said...

Simply scribbler!
Too good this one was!

Keep writing:)

vandana said...

"may i go down on my knee to express?
to say how much i much i love my princess...."

ah...heartfelt...romanticism at its best...any woman's dream i wud say!!loved it!!

starDust said...

my dil going hmmmmm.... :D

tehreem said...

This wasn’t any wedlock but a pact their souls had made.
a sublte touch , like fur ,so peace i felt in these lines when i read them.
STAY BLESSED.

Anonymous said...

Hey, This was a heart warming scribble..

Great work my friend.

Love sunbeam..

tehreem said...

i dont get this y do u call your work scribble., as a reader i feel your work is compelte master piece isnt it? or you are very humble to call it master piece.

Dipa Uchil said...

Lovely and comforting...Wish I had a magic wand to turn every guy to think like u...ur too good charlie :)