Tuesday, September 18, 2007

Inside Out


Mirrors never tell the truth,
They deceive your eyes and tell you lies.
Nothing is what meets your eye
For the truth is hidden deep inside,
Which is only seen by the loved one your heart desires.

13 comments:

Rya said...

Well, mirrors and images are deceptive, you have re-established it again, its short, crisp and to the point, thats a fine writer's speciality, he can reveal the flavour and essence of a theme in a few words as well, keep scribbling! great goin!

Madhavi said...

So damn true!!!
Very wel put down indeed

Anonymous said...

keep scribbling........but the subject is fictitious... Images are deceptive but mirror supports them too..
Chris

Anonymous said...

Very well wrote,
Mirrors & looks are always deceptive...still v makes d mistake......
Good work..Keep it up........

Have you wrote any thing On "Guilt",if yes plz do me know.........

To be or not to be said...

hey scribbler.....jus bout says wht i wanted 2 say......luv da pic...luv ur works 2!!!

akanksha said...

So true infact!!!! VEry well written and the pic is amazing too.:-) and once again i would say, i dont consider this one as just a scribbling too!!! good work!

Pri said...

very true...appearances can often be deceptive...
the truth lies deep within and can be perceived not by the eye but only by the heart :)

Matangi Mawley said...

how true! beautiful!

blogged in! said...

Lovely thought!

sashu said...

absolutely brilliant! loved it so...

nisha said...

very true... will have to say.. u really play wid words..

C R D said...

Hey.. really good one man. so damn true.

and then again even your eyes and smile lie, and theres no loved one to see the truth

keep writing.

chk mine if u like hindi poetry

www.crissdude.blogspot.com

Binny said...

Nice work Charlie...Though surely not amongst your best ones...the rhymes sumwhere feel a lil forceful to me!