Saturday, July 21, 2007

Surrender


Bow your heads down and look beneath.
Oh! You ever glowing stars from above.
Lying on her back she sleeps so calmly.
Like a placid lake amidst lush greenery.
With those tender fingers keying a msg for her Scribbler.
She innocently chuckles and rolls over like a cute toddler.
As though she's whispering her best kept secret into my ears.
Her eyes are gleaming brighter than any of you stars up there.
Take refuge behind those clouds if you don't want to scamper;
Watch the darkness go on its knees before her
And slowly surrender.

7 comments:

INDR's Angels said...

Short and candid.
way to go mate.
:)

Anonymous said...

I surrender all.. All to.... I surrender all.. The last line was mind blowing dude.
Chris

Sanchari said...

aww..that was so romantic..am sure the stars have surrendered :)

A Poetess said...

hail scribbler...or shud i say scribbler's return

btw..has it gt to do neting with ur em,neice??:->
just wondering...4got her name[as usual]..sumting like smriti...i think!!
any ways cheerios dude
~debadyuti~

devanshi said...

bhery nyc :)

Anonymous said...

This is one of my favourite scribblez.

Shal said...

Cuteeee :))