Saturday, June 09, 2007

BOND

How strange some relationships are?

Some begin that very moment you’re born.

Some are destined for you even before you’re formed.

Some begin with a simple glance

Some begin over an argument for taking your stance.


Many take wings between two virtual windows.

And some just head nowhere

even if they’re in the next door.

Now don’t forget the old coffee place or pub.

Where it begins with a stir or even while you shout cheers.


A few you think that’ll last forever.

And some that just begins and moves no further.

Some begin and end between two destinations.

Few are like those railway tracks that travel for miles together

But do they get to ever meet each other?


No matter where you began, right now you’re here.

Reading this scribble that’s just about to end.

Now, here you have a choice either take it or leave it.

If you want to begin a new bond,

You can leave your comment just before you leave.

17 comments:

smriti said...

loved that....wish i cd write like u, scribbie....keep up d good work...cheers to u..[:)]

theshysoulcruiser said...

hmmm... a new boond we shall begin den.. gud work... :)

INDR's Angels said...

nice post.
talks abt the bondings we share . a very good one indeed. tc

Megna.m said...

hey...

great scribble....speaks nicely bout the way diff bonds begin :)

may this bond never break :)

Anonymous said...

sexy bro.. rocked as usual..
Regards
Chris

miles to go before i sleep... said...

wow.......
amazing...a grat job on everyone of the poems...they are really good.

sashu said...

lemme step in n leave a comment
so deep and true,this scribble is
hope to carry our bond,a stretch further! :)

Anonymous said...

Nice : ) Cindu!

Anonymous said...

another nice one =) could totally relate

Deja Vu said...

hmm i think u r gonna get a lot of comments on this one. well i have seen ppl do this. that is u kno when they r told to do sumtin which ud improve their image to people. here it is by the simpl act of caring to put a comment in there. well as for the rest of the poem hmm am a bit scared of those railway tracks tht never meet. maybe i cud have been in such a state. so i will always be doing wht ever i can to make those railway tracks meet. sumtime u kno the bonds tht form between two destinations are the ones that reveal a lot abt u. in the end its all upto us whether we wanta relation ship to move or not. sometimes we choose not to move them simply becoz we realize tht if we try to move them they will break becoz not all ppl understand u. and yeh i do belive in destiny. relationships destined to be. and yeh i remember one such reltionship tht u can say began with an arguement lolz.very tru words tht u have written here. its like linkin park's lyrics makes u think cuz u identify so much with it. lolz. i like how u combined the simple uncomplicated language and the truth of the lyrics to deliver something tht will be looping in everyone's head. nice goin boss. this is as far as my head will go now comment on the other ones later.

Benaifer said...

loved this one...a fact tat is soo true especially bearing the fact that we all r soo caught in the web of the web lately...n for sure we do end up sharin a lot attimes wid sumone faceless thru virtual windows...

loved the subject n loved the way u framed it even more...

way to go!!! cheers!!!

Shiv said...

Loved seein the scribbles again..:)

Suma Subramaniam said...

A very well written piece. Hats off!

shruthi srinivas said...

toooo good!!! u have some awesome talent dude! keep it going :)

devil in diguise said...

beautiful!:)

Chinmaya said...

fantastic work..gud comaprisions as well..end is amazing n unique must say ;)

BLACKMYST3RY said...

wooW! soo truE! u hv amazing skills in engaging u're reader and manipulating their thoughts and making them fall in love with your work! cheerz maTe! u're really talentd! best wishes!