Tuesday, March 20, 2007

CLICHES

More than a million songs you might have heard
All about love and being loved
Heartbreaks and memories that can never be erased
Everything sounds very much the same
And every word is repeated again and again
It seems as though there are templates to convey your love
Though you’ve heard it for the first time
You feel that you’ve already heard it before
Even if the feeling’s the same since Stone Age
I’m sure there are a zillion other ways to express
And every time you tell your love to someone
It doesn’t necessarily be with those three little words
For your love is best said
When you don’t even utter a single word
As your eyes will surely give it away
It'll shout out loud by sending echoes all the way

13 comments:

Anonymous said...

Thanks dude.. Charlie trust me this is what my silence shouts and echoes all over but no hope coming back to recover me again..
Love You Brother.
Chris!!!!!

Anonymous said...

the one thing that all of us are looking for... love!! :) it was beautiful....

Megna.m said...

very beautiful :)

invisible reflections said...

true .. veryyyy true... subtle expression.. mild but pure i think .. with an assuring aura.. easy to relate to . like it

Chinmaya said...

very poignant mr scribbler..u still r d best whn it comes 2 conveying some feelings..keep it up n come up with more like these..:)

sashu said...

its beautiful :)

For your love is best said
When you don’t even utter a single word
As your eyes will surely give it away
It'll shout out loud by sending echoes all the way

lovely lines :) good work charlie :)

Archana said...

This is not clouded by a Stone Age template. I am proud of you. Good work!

INDR's Angels said...

everytime ur work impresses me.
gr8 job dude.

A Poetess said...

Eyes are supposed to give it all away...but believe me some ppl dont get it AT ALL..include me in the list:P
for dem poems/scribbles/etc are required

cheerios

Deja Vu said...

some are stupid... sometimes you need to say it and hear it over and over those three little words. lolz. hear it jus cuz it makes you happy. and coz sometimes you cnt see the other person. even if they kno it sometimes you jus feel like saying it over and over. but i will say tht often words cant express feelings. there are some feelings where words fail and a kiss tells... excuse me, i am goin into fantasy land lolz.

Krupa said...

u r so correct!!

smriti said...

CLICHED AS THIS MAY ALSO SOUND BT "UR SCRIBBLES R JUST INDISPENSABLE N U TRULY R A CHAMP" :)

Wish said...

Just Wonderful...