Thursday, September 21, 2006

SIX FEET UNDER


She sat by my side with pain and remorse
Tears rolled down like rain drops from the skies
Mascara smudged as fingers ran across her face
Lost for words she wept in despair
The rains gave up seeing her reign of tears
I lay beside her helplessly failing to console
Craving to patch up the hole in her soul
But still she sat by my side with pain and remorse
As I lay beside her unshaken, six feet under

4 comments:

Pradeep said...

your sribbles are very good ... keep it up

Raja Shahnawaz Soni said...

Man u write well , i must say, i shud start thinking of improving my writing skills , too good...........

ReDefining Definitions said...

oh i finally got the right one....

hmmm ...aahhhhmmm....u were right its a completely diff approach...
again ur visualisation is commendable...

while i fight gravity u succumb to it...
somehow i never lose hope rather i write poems to find the lost ones.. think bout it then get back

Deepali said...

You got a nice blog :)