Thursday, September 21, 2006

9/11

During the dawn, long way to dusk
When the pillars of Earth were turned into dust
The birds from hell struck with thrust
And crumbled the pillars that held the heaven
Mass massacre, souls led astray
Into the wilderness of rubble and debris
The angels of death hover around
Less chance of lives alive on the ground
Crucifixion of democracy by the savages of terror
Souls enslaved, anarchy in rule
The heaven has fallen and the Fallen dances away

1 comment:

Anonymous said...

"The heaven has fallen and the Fallen dances away"


its a good effort but i felt an absence of rhythm in the lines. narration and imagery are some of ur strongest points.use it here n maybe if u give it more space 9/11 wud probably make us cry!
otherwise very brusque and pointed.
keep it up :)